Review – Humanity’s Hope by Pembroke Sinclair

Humanity's Hope
By: Pembroke Sinclair
Website: http://pembrokesinclair.blogspot.com/
Release Date: July 21, 2017
Publisher: Stitched Smile Publication
Received From: Publisher
(All reviews are our own, honest opinions.)
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I’m not sure if things one genuinely enjoys should be called guilty pleasures, but zombie novels would definitely that category for me. I’m always up for a good zombie story. Well, I was offered the chance to read Humanity’s Hope by Pembroke Sinclair, which is, you guessed it, a zombie novel. Let’s take a look, shall we?

Caleb is a teenager just trying to survive in post zombie infested world. It’s safe in the city, or safer than most other places. He has a job, a place to live, and with the help of his psychiatrist is trying to slowly move forward. But there are rumors of experiments done in secret to find a cure for zombie virus, and when a neighbor is killed in an unheard of zombie attack in the city Caleb begins to wonder if there’s any truth to this. Soon he finds himself on the run, apparently immune to the virus. He’s fought zombies before. But humans are stronger and infinitely more clever.


The story takes place in an interested time during the zombie apocalypse. Civilization has cobbled itself back together, at least in some places, and our main characters has already traversed the wastelands and found somewhere safe. However, the zombie virus has not been cured, zombies are still rampant, particularly in the lands beyond cities. Peace feels tenuous. People try to go back to the way things are, outwardly ignoring certain aspects of how things have changed socially and culturally but accepting others. For example people are subjected to blood tests at regular intervals to ensure no possibility of a zombie outbreak, and teenagers are regularly employed in the general workforce due to a severe lack of shortage of manpower. Yet, while treated as adults in most aspects and by and large having gone through literal hell, surviving odds they never should have survived, teenagers must still live with a legal guardian.

I really enjoyed the widespread social and cultural aspects included in the novel. I also liked the aspect that mental health plays. Caleb has survived a lot, outliving his family and friends, and had to do whatever he possibly could to survive. But this has left a huge mark, one dealt with in the book. I find that the psychological toll of something like the zombie apocalypse isn’t often dealt with, at least not in very much detail, in many of the zombie books and manga that I’ve read. This was a welcome change from the norm.

However, the book does have its flaws. While the first half of the story builds up an interesting story the second half stall. The writing becomes repetitive. World building is described twice, the sections feeling extremely similar to those in previous chapters and largely unnecessary.

This was not a fast paced read by any means. What could be an exciting thriller is slowed with Caleb’s inner thoughts. At first, this was fine. However, the fretting, the explanations, and the indecisive decision making just became repetitive. Everything was explained. Everything. Even when dialogue or body language explicitly shows what Caleb is thinking or how he feels, at least one whole paragraph is added describing these things in detail. This bogs the story down in some sections to an almost unreadable pace. Conversations crawl along. Fast paced sections are put on pause while we divest time to explore Caleb’s thoughts and feelings no matter how blatant they might be.

Later chapters feel into this especially, partially because the same things were being described over and over again. A good deal of world building was provided in earlier chapters, painting a very comprehensive picture of the city and the social structure where Caleb lives. Things that were explained in the first half of the book are re-explained in the second half when Caleb encounters these people/objects/situations again.

The ending was extremely abrupt. It feels as if this was the first book in a series, but as far as I can tell, there are no further books. The twist at the end was rather unnecessary, especially as it made little sense despite being built up in the second half of the novel. Motives were explained but felt a bit contrived, as if this was added in quite late in development. Last chapter doesn’t feel like the concluding chapter of a novel, but rather like the second to last or third to last. I fully expected to half another chapter of wrap up, but instead there was only one A good number of questions remain unanswered. Objects and characters that were introduced are left hanging, completely forgotten about or else deliberately ignored. This was made all the worse because there was a good amount of world building in the book. The city and how it functioned were outlined rather well. Caleb’s character was also provided a good amount of backstory. His actions, even when a bit, were usually understandable. This made the abrupt ending, the lack of follow through with plot elements, all the more disappointing.

While Humanity’s Hope by Pembroke Sinclair started rather strongly featuring an interesting main character and good world building, it pittered out before stopping incredibly abruptly. If there was any indication there would be a sequel I would still be disappointed in the ending, but at least would understand why the plot stopped where it did. However, if you like zombie stories and are looking for something that include the psychological repercussions of a zombie uprising check out this book and see what you think.

Read If:
You crave a new zombie story; You like stories that deal with the psychological repercussions of events

Don't Read If:
You don't like open endings; You don't like a lot of description and/or analyzing in books

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Kathleen Townsend

Kate writes things, reads things, and writes about things she reads. She’s had a few short stories published, and works as a freelance editor. Favorite genres include epic & high fantasy, science fiction, time travel stories, video game related tales, light novels, and manga.

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